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Re: First Paragraph Feedback
Pretty intriguing, I like how you jump right into the action, but with enough vagueness that it leaves me wondering how she ended up in this predicament in the first ...
Feb 10, 2009
Pretty intriguing, I like how you jump right into the action, but with enough vagueness that it leaves me wondering how she ended up in this predicament in the first ...
Feb 10, 2009
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